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1/2 face draw thing

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possible rwby oc using an old design? maybe 
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Oo nice color scheme! Reminds me of a city at night~

Profile drawing is a pain in the butt for me too so I'll try to offer my advice~

- Overall, it looks too flat.
- The lips have no definition. Shouldn't be flat across. (in some of the cutesy kawaii uguu styles you don't need to wrry about that, but in your drawing style, i think it would help to draw lips)
- Eye is drawn as if it is facing the front. It doesn't look like an eye from the side.

Unrelated, but I think the shading on the hair is too uniform; the hair strands shouldn't be parallel like that. Try shading more irregularly? //lol not sure if that makes sense

Overall though, Id suggest copying some profile pics for practice. Real people, good drawings, etc. I always do this when fine-tuning my drawing skills, and it helps a lot. Keep up the good work~ :3 That eye is very nicely colored too~